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\nBe careful only when you rely on other sources to provide evidence to your argument. For example, for talking about health effects, is better to use websites such as webmd.com and not usatoday.com. No need to change this time, but if you refer to a popular magazine or newspaper, remember you should corroborate if the info it's well managed.
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\nYour citation should go like this: Luna Lin, "Male Fertility Decline in China Linked to Air Pollution," China Dialogue, November 21, 2013, accessed October 3, 2015, https:\/\/www.chinadialogue.net\/blog\/6523-Male-fertility-decline-in-China-linked-to-air-pollution\/en<\/a>.","rangeActions":[{"name":"Comment added","rangeText":"Lin, Luna. \"Male Fertility Decline in China Linked to Air Pollution.\"<\/em> China Dialogue. November 21, 2013. Accessed October 3, 2015.","dateCreated":"1447687200","user":{"username":"odonia10","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/odonia10","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/Week+5+Annotation\/566614225?mode=code"}],"replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"76291303","dateCreated":"1447687200","smartDate":"Nov 16, 2015","userCreated":{"username":"odonia10","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/odonia10","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/theasthmafiles2015.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/76291303"},"dateDigested":1532141317,"commentId":"562254843_1","orphaned":false,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"comment","title":"Comment: \u4e3a\u4e86\u6b63\u786e\u5f15\u7528\u8ddf\u968fGBT 7714 2015\u89c4\u5219\uff1a\n\u4f5c\u8005\uff0e\u7535\u5b50\u6587\u732e\u9898\u540d[\u6587\u732e...","description":"\u4e3a\u4e86\u6b63\u786e\u5f15\u7528\u8ddf\u968fGBT 7714 2015\u89c4\u5219\uff1a
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