{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"76293305","dateCreated":"1447692701","smartDate":"Nov 16, 2015","userCreated":{"username":"odonia10","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/odonia10","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/theasthmafiles2015.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/76293305"},"dateDigested":1532141266,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"In general terms","description":"Rongrong, here we have an example of two sensitive part of our annotations. One is the way you, as an author, provide a explanation to somebody who has never read this article, and the other, your personal opinion about it. Making clear when your doing either one or the other exercise is very important to avoid misunderstandings. Let me explain:<br \/>\nThe first article was not meant to be academic, although was published in an academic journal. It's part of a section which authors explain a topic and, apparently, can provide their own point of view. As you see, it was infortunate how the author presupposes that somethings might changed but only temporarily, without providing much analysis. Saying that authoritative is equal to unefficient should be put in context.<br \/>\nNow, what you have to think is how to analyze the piece,  trying to avoid considerations like &quot;Nothing original was used to produce the claims in the article&quot; or &quot;Chinese government is so authoritative that whatever it does to ensure the air quality during Olympic Game, it's only a temporary fix&quot;.  Try instead of opening a polemic first, to dialogue with the article. If you consider that the article was not clear about a point consider explaining that this was not a research paper, but anyways lacks of data to claim something. Or, when the use of a term, like authoritative, is misleading try to explain why (i.e. there was not sufficient context, there are wrong assumptions, etc.).<br \/>\nThe second article, has a closer approach for what we are looking, and you did a very good analysis.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[{"id":"75611749","dateCreated":"1444622696","smartDate":"Oct 11, 2015","userCreated":{"username":"jalexandrafox","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/jalexandrafox","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/theasthmafiles2015.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/75611749"},"dateDigested":1532141265,"commentId":"562098673_2","orphaned":false,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"comment","title":"Comment: Would you call this a biased article?","description":"Would you call this a biased article?","rangeActions":[{"name":"Comment added","rangeText":"Finally the author reaches a conclusion that Chinese government is so authoritative that whatever it does to ensure the air quality during Olympic Game, it's only a temporary fix.","dateCreated":"1444622701","user":{"username":"jalexandrafox","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/jalexandrafox","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/Week+6+Annotation\/562128801?mode=code"},{"name":"Comment region changed","rangeText":"Finally the author reaches a conclusion that Chinese government is so authoritative that whatever it does to ensure the air quality during Olympic Game, it's only a temporary fix.","dateCreated":"1444623198","user":{"username":"jalexandrafox","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/jalexandrafox","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/Week+6+Annotation\/562129167?mode=code"}],"replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"84822243","body":"Sorry for the late reply. In fact, I do consider this a biased article. Simply because there is no logic relation between a temporary fix of air quality and whether Chinese government is authoritative or not.","dateCreated":"1445137720","smartDate":"Oct 17, 2015","userCreated":{"username":"miaor","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/miaor","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"75611751","dateCreated":"1444622701","smartDate":"Oct 11, 2015","userCreated":{"username":"jalexandrafox","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/jalexandrafox","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/theasthmafiles2015.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/75611751"},"dateDigested":1532141265,"commentId":"562098673_1","orphaned":false,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"comment","title":"Comment: Is an urbanite someone who lives in t...","description":"Is an urbanite someone who lives in the city?","rangeActions":[{"name":"Comment added","rangeText":"urbanites","dateCreated":"1444622702","user":{"username":"jalexandrafox","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/jalexandrafox","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/Week+6+Annotation\/562128801?mode=code"}],"replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"84822253","body":"According to Oxford Advanced Learner's Dictionary: urbanite is a person who lives in a town or city.","dateCreated":"1445137816","smartDate":"Oct 17, 2015","userCreated":{"username":"miaor","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/miaor","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"75611755","dateCreated":"1444622702","smartDate":"Oct 11, 2015","userCreated":{"username":"jalexandrafox","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/jalexandrafox","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/theasthmafiles2015.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/75611755"},"dateDigested":1532141265,"commentId":"562098673_3","orphaned":false,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"comment","title":"Comment: Why 8th month? Did all other data sho...","description":"Why 8th month? Did all other data show no increase in birth weight? Do you think this was a manipulation of data?","rangeActions":[{"name":"Comment added","rangeText":"8the month of pregnancy","dateCreated":"1444622703","user":{"username":"jalexandrafox","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/jalexandrafox","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/Week+6+Annotation\/562128801?mode=code"},{"name":"Comment region changed","rangeText":"8the month of pregnancy","dateCreated":"1444623198","user":{"username":"jalexandrafox","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/jalexandrafox","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/Week+6+Annotation\/562129167?mode=code"}],"replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"84822353","body":"As in their unadjusted sensitivity analysis, in the 8th month, the baby is more sensitive to the quality of air that the mother breathes. Satistics show that birth weight increases in 2008 compared to the same date in 2007 and 2009 with an increase of 22g in the 8th month, which is the greatest one. Also, the null assumption of the authors would state: birth weight is adversely associated with air pollutant concentrations during pregnancy. The p-value that the calculated in the 8th month is 0.01, which indicates that there is weak statistic evidence that the null assumption will not hold,which means the authors can safely claim that their theory is most likely be correct at the 8th month of pregnancy.","dateCreated":"1445138729","smartDate":"Oct 17, 2015","userCreated":{"username":"miaor","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/miaor","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"84822357","body":"I'm sorry just a typo. The p-value calulated is 0.1, not 0.01.","dateCreated":"1445138782","smartDate":"Oct 17, 2015","userCreated":{"username":"miaor","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/miaor","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"75611753","dateCreated":"1444622702","smartDate":"Oct 11, 2015","userCreated":{"username":"jalexandrafox","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/jalexandrafox","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/theasthmafiles2015.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/75611753"},"dateDigested":1532141266,"commentId":"562098673_5","orphaned":false,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"comment","title":"Comment: Crazy that pollution can travel so fa...","description":"Crazy that pollution can travel so far. Interesting find.","rangeActions":[{"name":"Comment added","rangeText":"And the findings show that pollution from China affects cloud development in the North Pacific and strengthens extra tropical cyclones.","dateCreated":"1444622702","user":{"username":"jalexandrafox","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/jalexandrafox","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/Week+6+Annotation\/562128801?mode=code"},{"name":"Comment region changed","rangeText":"And the findings show that pollution from China affects cloud development in the North Pacific and strengthens extra tropical cyclones.","dateCreated":"1444623198","user":{"username":"jalexandrafox","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/jalexandrafox","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/Week+6+Annotation\/562129167?mode=code"}],"replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"76292835","dateCreated":"1447691508","smartDate":"Nov 16, 2015","userCreated":{"username":"(guest)","url":"","imageUrl":"\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/theasthmafiles2015.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/76292835"},"dateDigested":1532141266,"commentId":"562129167_1","orphaned":false,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"comment","title":"Comment: This article appeared in The Lancet. ...","description":"This article appeared in The Lancet. World Report is the name of one section of journal. <br \/>\nPlease change it following the Chicago Style, and add the volume of the publication (366).","rangeActions":[{"name":"Comment added","rangeText":"Watts, Jonathan. \"China: The Air Pollution Capital of the World.\" World Report, November 19, 2005, 1761-762.","dateCreated":"1447691509","user":{"username":"(guest)","url":"","imageUrl":"\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/Week+6+Annotation\/566626437?mode=code"}],"replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"76292839","dateCreated":"1447691509","smartDate":"Nov 16, 2015","userCreated":{"username":"(guest)","url":"","imageUrl":"\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/theasthmafiles2015.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/76292839"},"dateDigested":1532141266,"commentId":"562129167_4","orphaned":false,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"comment","title":"Comment: This claim has to be in context. The ...","description":"This claim has to be in context. The article is not the result of a research, therefore we can't expect scientific findings.","rangeActions":[{"name":"Comment added","rangeText":"Nothing original was used to produce the claims in the article.","dateCreated":"1447691510","user":{"username":"(guest)","url":"","imageUrl":"\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/Week+6+Annotation\/566626437?mode=code"}],"replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"76292837","dateCreated":"1447691509","smartDate":"Nov 16, 2015","userCreated":{"username":"(guest)","url":"","imageUrl":"\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/theasthmafiles2015.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/76292837"},"dateDigested":1532141266,"commentId":"562129167_5","orphaned":false,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"comment","title":"Comment: To be fair, the author also mentions ...","description":"To be fair, the author also mentions that &quot;the government is not only aware of the problems, but -tentatively- starting to do something about them&quot;. <br \/>\nIt is true that the term 'authoritarian' in the last paragraph sounds out of context, but we have to know this is not a research but a personal opinion.","rangeActions":[{"name":"Comment added","rangeText":"Finally the author reaches a conclusion that Chinese government is so authoritative that whatever it does to ensure the air quality during Olympic Game, it's only a temporary fix.","dateCreated":"1447691509","user":{"username":"(guest)","url":"","imageUrl":"\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/Week+6+Annotation\/566626437?mode=code"}],"replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"76292843","dateCreated":"1447691510","smartDate":"Nov 16, 2015","userCreated":{"username":"(guest)","url":"","imageUrl":"\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/theasthmafiles2015.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/76292843"},"dateDigested":1532141266,"commentId":"562129167_2","orphaned":false,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"comment","title":"Comment: According Chicago Style, journal cita...","description":"According Chicago Style, journal citations should include the name of the journal in italics.","rangeActions":[{"name":"Comment added","rangeText":"Rich, David. \"Differences in Birth Weight Associated with the 2008 Beijing Olympics Air Pollution Reduction: Results from a Natural Experiment.\" Environmental Health Perspectives 123, no. 9 (2015): 880-887.","dateCreated":"1447691511","user":{"username":"(guest)","url":"","imageUrl":"\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/Week+6+Annotation\/566626437?mode=code"}],"replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"76292845","dateCreated":"1447691511","smartDate":"Nov 16, 2015","userCreated":{"username":"(guest)","url":"","imageUrl":"\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/theasthmafiles2015.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/76292845"},"dateDigested":1532141266,"commentId":"562129167_3","orphaned":false,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"comment","title":"Comment: Rephrase this part. Do you mean: &quo...","description":"Rephrase this part. Do you mean: &quot;As other researchers have shown previously&quot; or you want to say &quot;As previous research has shown...&quot; ?","rangeActions":[{"name":"Comment added","rangeText":"As previous researches show that decreased birth weight is associated with increased air pollutant concentrations during pregnancy. But it's still unclear that whether or not increased exposure to air pollution during pregnancy affects birth weight.","dateCreated":"1447691511","user":{"username":"(guest)","url":"","imageUrl":"\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"diffUrl":"\/page\/diff\/Week+6+Annotation\/566626437?mode=code"}],"replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}